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Showing posts with label should've known better. Show all posts
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Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Review: Should've Known Better by Cassandra Carr


Title: Should've Known Better
Series: Possibly in the future.....? :)
Author: Cassandra Carr
Published: April 2013, Twenty or Less Press
Format: Ebook provided for review

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?



Should’ve Known Better was pretty different from the other books I’ve read from Cassandra Carr. A lot of her books have this high heat level that will leave you panting like a dog in heat. Should’ve Known Better did not have that heat level. It was entirely a horse of a different color, and I really enjoyed reading this other side to Cassandra’s writing. Don't get me wrong, there was some heat - and some sensuality, but it wasn't the focus as much in this story as in others.



Here is the story of Sarah, who has just accepted a position with the Storm in the NHL. She is now a “Competitive Analysis Consultant”. Huh? Yeah, I didn’t know what it was at first either, but as the story went on, and I learned more about her new job, the more I became interested in not only her, and her love life, but her actual job. That is kind of a first for me. So what Sarah does is she uses math to analyze and improve her players games. Anything from their stance, to their stick, to … who knows what? The sky is the limit. Not being a sporty person, I have no idea if this is something that is real – but it most certainly should be!

Right away Sarah bumps into Sebastian, literally. Like there is spillage on the floor. Multiple times. And yes, I chuckled every time. Sebastian turns out to be a very atypical man in his early twenties – especially for a guy who is getting a shot playing in the NHL. He is sensitive and sweet, a bit nervous, and caring. The overall package on him is quite endearing, and I found it easy to care for this character.

There is obvious sexual tension and major attraction between Sarah and Sebastian. The problem lies in the fact that Sarah is worried about losing this totally terrific job she just landed. And that is probably also aided by something from her past that she is trying to move past, but is learning it isn’t always so easy to overcome painful things. The two of them share quite a few secretive kisses. I really liked that they didn’t just fall into bed together, hot and heavy. It was a build up. There were nerves and anxiety, and the stolen kisses, furtive glances. There was an element of it that was teasing to the reader just as much the characters, and I found it to be a nice change of pace.

And while both Sebastian and Sarah were very interesting, there were other characters in this story too! *Gasp!* Right? LOL. Mainly, I mean Sebastian’s roommate, Rob. Rob is also on the team, and he is like a protective German Shepherd when it comes to his friend. But Rob also has this other side that is completely sarcastic and funny, and you just know he would be a blast to hang around. I really loved any time he had a scene. I would definitely say he is a character I want to see more of in the future.

There is a lot that happens in this book, it’s really quite the story. You really get a chance to get to know these two, and why they are acting the way they are. And when things begin to heat up – in both positive and negative ways for them – it really is quite a page turner. Cassandra's writing is fabulous, and it grabs you write away to take you for a ride. I think that if you are into contemporary sports romance, that this book should definitely be on your TBR!


Review: Should've Known Better by Cassandra Carr


Title: Should've Known Better
Series: Possibly in the future.....? :)
Author: Cassandra Carr
Published: April 2013, Twenty or Less Press
Format: Ebook provided for review

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?



Should’ve Known Better was pretty different from the other books I’ve read from Cassandra Carr. A lot of her books have this high heat level that will leave you panting like a dog in heat. Should’ve Known Better did not have that heat level. It was entirely a horse of a different color, and I really enjoyed reading this other side to Cassandra’s writing. Don't get me wrong, there was some heat - and some sensuality, but it wasn't the focus as much in this story as in others.

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Guest Post: Cassandra Carr, author of Should've Known Better


Should've Known Better
Cassandra Carr

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?

Today I have a guest post by Cassandra Carr!  I have this book to review, coming up soon, but I'm really very excited to have a guest post spot on the tour.  The story behind the story is very interesting, and I always love getting an extra peak into what goes on with getting a book out there to us!


Rewriting, and why even New York publishers aren't always right
by Cassandra Carr


My newest release, Should've Known Better, has been around a LONG time compared to other manuscripts of mine. Most of my books are written, sent to a publisher, acquired, edited and released all within six to eight months. But not Should've Known Better. Oh no...Should've Known Better stuck around for almost five years and wouldn't leave me alone.

The original iteration of Should've Known Better was pitched to agents and editors in 2009 and 2010. It was very well received considering I was an unpublished author. More than one NY house took a lonnnnnnngggggggg (you authors know what I mean) look before either issuing a "revise and resubmit" letter or a rejection letter. But in the end, it was rejected - many times. Hey, it was my first book, and now I can see the problems it had.

In the meantime, I wrote and submitted Talk to Me to publishers. Loose Id bought Talk to Me and I was on my way!

But wait, what about Should've Known Better? I re-wrote Should've Known Better after both critique partner feedback and publisher feedback. And it still got rejected. Should've Known Better isnot an erotic romance. I'd say it's steamy, but not erotic, at least by my standards. If you read my erotic works you know I like the smex. A lot. Why am I bringing this up? Well, Loose Id appeared to like me. After they acquired Talk to Me they also bought a holiday-themed BDSM novella, Caught. Yes, BDSM goes with the holidays. Seriously, it does. Unfortunately, since Loose Id only publishes erotic romance, I couldn't sell Should've Known Better to them. At the time, Loose Id was the only publisher I had an "in" with, and they didn't publish the type of work Should've Known Better is.

Even when my brain/my friends/my fellow authors were telling me to move on, I couldn't let it go. I have a kind of a battle cry about hating to write words I don't sell. It's a waste of time, and I already had a lot of time invested in Should've Known Better. I was going to sell the darn thing!

So I rewrote Should've Known Better. Again. And submitted it to publishers. And got rejected.

Would this book ever sell? I got busy with other projects and Should've Known Better sat on a shelf while I tried to figure out if I wanted to rewrite it YET AGAIN or just put it under the bed. I'm aware that most writer's first books, and sometimes their second/third/fourth never get published because that's when authors are learning their craft.

Remember my battle cry? No matter that it was my first book. I couldn't let it go!

Fortunately for me, my editor at Twenty or Less Press, a boutique publisher I have released short stories and anthologies through, saw the potential in Should've Known Better. But the iteration she read beared little resemblence to the one the NY publishers exhibited interest in years ago. And you know what? It's not a bad thing they didn't acquire the book the way it was. I mean, sure, everyone loves selling to the Penguins and Berkleys of the world (both of whom showed interest back then), but when the book isn't the best it can be, it shouldn't be let out into the world. This third (or thirteenth, who's counting) rewrite of Should've Known Better made it a book I can be proud of. NY is not always right. And you shouldn't let a manuscript go if you really believe in it.


Previous Reviews on Cassandra's Books





Guest Post: Cassandra Carr, author of Should've Known Better


Should've Known Better
Cassandra Carr

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?

Today I have a guest post by Cassandra Carr!  I have this book to review, coming up soon, but I'm really very excited to have a guest post spot on the tour.  The story behind the story is very interesting, and I always love getting an extra peak into what goes on with getting a book out there to us!


Rewriting, and why even New York publishers aren't always right
by Cassandra Carr


My newest release, Should've Known Better, has been around a LONG time compared to other manuscripts of mine. Most of my books are written, sent to a publisher, acquired, edited and released all within six to eight months. But not Should've Known Better. Oh no...Should've Known Better stuck around for almost five years and wouldn't leave me alone.

The original iteration of Should've Known Better was pitched to agents and editors in 2009 and 2010. It was very well received considering I was an unpublished author. More than one NY house took a lonnnnnnngggggggg (you authors know what I mean) look before either issuing a "revise and resubmit" letter or a rejection letter. But in the end, it was rejected - many times. Hey, it was my first book, and now I can see the problems it had.

In the meantime, I wrote and submitted Talk to Me to publishers. Loose Id bought Talk to Me and I was on my way!

But wait, what about Should've Known Better? I re-wrote Should've Known Better after both critique partner feedback and publisher feedback. And it still got rejected. Should've Known Better isnot an erotic romance. I'd say it's steamy, but not erotic, at least by my standards. If you read my erotic works you know I like the smex. A lot. Why am I bringing this up? Well, Loose Id appeared to like me. After they acquired Talk to Me they also bought a holiday-themed BDSM novella, Caught. Yes, BDSM goes with the holidays. Seriously, it does. Unfortunately, since Loose Id only publishes erotic romance, I couldn't sell Should've Known Better to them. At the time, Loose Id was the only publisher I had an "in" with, and they didn't publish the type of work Should've Known Better is.

Even when my brain/my friends/my fellow authors were telling me to move on, I couldn't let it go. I have a kind of a battle cry about hating to write words I don't sell. It's a waste of time, and I already had a lot of time invested in Should've Known Better. I was going to sell the darn thing!

So I rewrote Should've Known Better. Again. And submitted it to publishers. And got rejected.

Would this book ever sell? I got busy with other projects and Should've Known Better sat on a shelf while I tried to figure out if I wanted to rewrite it YET AGAIN or just put it under the bed. I'm aware that most writer's first books, and sometimes their second/third/fourth never get published because that's when authors are learning their craft.

Remember my battle cry? No matter that it was my first book. I couldn't let it go!

Fortunately for me, my editor at Twenty or Less Press, a boutique publisher I have released short stories and anthologies through, saw the potential in Should've Known Better. But the iteration she read beared little resemblence to the one the NY publishers exhibited interest in years ago. And you know what? It's not a bad thing they didn't acquire the book the way it was. I mean, sure, everyone loves selling to the Penguins and Berkleys of the world (both of whom showed interest back then), but when the book isn't the best it can be, it shouldn't be let out into the world. This third (or thirteenth, who's counting) rewrite of Should've Known Better made it a book I can be proud of. NY is not always right. And you shouldn't let a manuscript go if you really believe in it.


Previous Reviews on Cassandra's Books



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