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Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Review: Should've Known Better by Cassandra Carr


Title: Should've Known Better
Series: Possibly in the future.....? :)
Author: Cassandra Carr
Published: April 2013, Twenty or Less Press
Format: Ebook provided for review

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?



Should’ve Known Better was pretty different from the other books I’ve read from Cassandra Carr. A lot of her books have this high heat level that will leave you panting like a dog in heat. Should’ve Known Better did not have that heat level. It was entirely a horse of a different color, and I really enjoyed reading this other side to Cassandra’s writing. Don't get me wrong, there was some heat - and some sensuality, but it wasn't the focus as much in this story as in others.



Here is the story of Sarah, who has just accepted a position with the Storm in the NHL. She is now a “Competitive Analysis Consultant”. Huh? Yeah, I didn’t know what it was at first either, but as the story went on, and I learned more about her new job, the more I became interested in not only her, and her love life, but her actual job. That is kind of a first for me. So what Sarah does is she uses math to analyze and improve her players games. Anything from their stance, to their stick, to … who knows what? The sky is the limit. Not being a sporty person, I have no idea if this is something that is real – but it most certainly should be!

Right away Sarah bumps into Sebastian, literally. Like there is spillage on the floor. Multiple times. And yes, I chuckled every time. Sebastian turns out to be a very atypical man in his early twenties – especially for a guy who is getting a shot playing in the NHL. He is sensitive and sweet, a bit nervous, and caring. The overall package on him is quite endearing, and I found it easy to care for this character.

There is obvious sexual tension and major attraction between Sarah and Sebastian. The problem lies in the fact that Sarah is worried about losing this totally terrific job she just landed. And that is probably also aided by something from her past that she is trying to move past, but is learning it isn’t always so easy to overcome painful things. The two of them share quite a few secretive kisses. I really liked that they didn’t just fall into bed together, hot and heavy. It was a build up. There were nerves and anxiety, and the stolen kisses, furtive glances. There was an element of it that was teasing to the reader just as much the characters, and I found it to be a nice change of pace.

And while both Sebastian and Sarah were very interesting, there were other characters in this story too! *Gasp!* Right? LOL. Mainly, I mean Sebastian’s roommate, Rob. Rob is also on the team, and he is like a protective German Shepherd when it comes to his friend. But Rob also has this other side that is completely sarcastic and funny, and you just know he would be a blast to hang around. I really loved any time he had a scene. I would definitely say he is a character I want to see more of in the future.

There is a lot that happens in this book, it’s really quite the story. You really get a chance to get to know these two, and why they are acting the way they are. And when things begin to heat up – in both positive and negative ways for them – it really is quite a page turner. Cassandra's writing is fabulous, and it grabs you write away to take you for a ride. I think that if you are into contemporary sports romance, that this book should definitely be on your TBR!


Review: Should've Known Better by Cassandra Carr


Title: Should've Known Better
Series: Possibly in the future.....? :)
Author: Cassandra Carr
Published: April 2013, Twenty or Less Press
Format: Ebook provided for review

Sara Jenkins, a math geek and hockey fanatic, is thrilled when the NHL hires her as an advisor for the Buffalo Storm. She gets to marry her two loves in this perfect job.

Sebastian St. Amant is a young hockey player looking to make the jump from the minors to the big leagues. His lifelong dream is within reach, but he needs to convince the Storm's management and coaches he's ready.

When Sara and Sebastian meet, sparks immediately fly. Both want to succeed, but neither can ignore the growing attraction and a relationship is out of the question—Sara’s an influential staff member and Sebastian’s a player, not to mention over ten years her junior.

But the impossible becomes the necessary when they can no longer fight their attraction. As everything crashes around them, the strength of their relationship is tested. Will it weather the storm, or should they have known better?



Should’ve Known Better was pretty different from the other books I’ve read from Cassandra Carr. A lot of her books have this high heat level that will leave you panting like a dog in heat. Should’ve Known Better did not have that heat level. It was entirely a horse of a different color, and I really enjoyed reading this other side to Cassandra’s writing. Don't get me wrong, there was some heat - and some sensuality, but it wasn't the focus as much in this story as in others.

Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Promo/Giveaway: Storm by Bernard DeLeo



Storm
Bernard DeLeo


The FBI blackmailed Storm Crandall; but only after Storm hacked their database. At sixteen, she’s under cover at a high school, looking for clues involving five missing girls. Besides computer skills, Storm has game in the magic department. A sect of the Temple of Set soon finds out power comes in many guises. With two FBI agents posing as her parents in the city of Warren, Ohio, Storm finds love, allies, and tragedy in her hunt for answers. By fulfilling her end of the bargain, Storm can buy her way out of spending the days until her eighteenth birthday in a juvenile detention facility.


The FBI agents discover their young charge can do more than type fast. Their first encounter with the creature behind the disappearances shows the agents they need Storm for far more than information gathering as a high school spy. With Storm’s FBI handlers shadowing her every movement and conversation, small breakthroughs in the case come to light. Three girls from the high school visit Perkins Park at night where the disappearances had happened, playing a dangerous game of dare. Two of the girls, Nancy Alverson and Chris Vasquez, leave their friend Carol Wangden alone in the park after an argument. They walk to the local Burger King only blocks away, hoping for a ride from Logan Stanfield. Finding Storm there with Tracy Washington, they explain the game they had been playing. Logan drives to the park with Storm and Tracy to find Carol. Agents Dixon and Holloway, listening in, head for the park too. Logan holds off the monster they find chasing down Carol long enough for Storm to cast an impromptu invocation which disperses the demon in front her companions.


Teaming up with the enigmatic Logan, Storm begins unraveling a horror no one anticipated. When the case morphs from serial kidnapping into a supernatural witch hunt, Storm and her friends, under the guidance of the FBI agents, scramble to stay alive while tracking down monsters both human and inhuman.


Bernard, since your book is about a teenage girl, What were the challenges of writing from a POV you have never experienced?
Dialogue interchanges and making sure my teen characters didn’t end up to be cardboard cutouts with clichéd phrases were my main concerns. Locales when involving an existing institution like a high school or park need to be vague enough not to set off detail oriented readers, but still provide an adequate backdrop for the story. I’ve always had a good ear for dialogue. While researching spells, demonology, and witchcraft for STORM, I paid very close attention to any and all interactions between young teens at malls, ballgames, restaurants, and waiting lines for movies. I play basketball every weekend with kids as young as sixteen. They provided an abundance of mannerisms and idioms for my novel. Plus, I have a good memory, and I was young once. ;) winking 


***EXCERPT***

“Oh my God!” Tracy screamed from the backseat. “What the hell is that?!”
Logan and Storm, glanced in the direction Tracy was pointing as Logan drove the car along Mahoning Avenue fronting the park. They saw a clearly terrified Carol running out of the adjacent sparsely wooded area with some kind of billowing blackness slouching after her. Logan jammed on the brakes of his Pontiac, reaching under the seat, and coming up with a tape handled two foot long lead pipe.

“Stay here!” Logan ordered, exiting the car at a dead run.

Storm ignored him and went out the passenger side at the same pace. Tracy called out after Storm to no avail. She immediately decided the back seat of Logan’s small, two door Pontiac Grand Am was not the place to be. By the time she scrambled over the front seat and out the passenger side door, Carol had fallen and was scrambling on all fours, making heart rending little screams in between gasps for air. Tracy ran after her friends as the opaque cloud drew near Carol. Tracy heard a car screech to a halt behind her, and glanced back to see Ted and Janet clamber out of their Honda.

“What the…” Janet managed to exclaim before simply shutting up and following Ted, who had not paused for even a second before running after the convergence before them.

A gnarled, slimy blackish limb snaked out of the darkness, reaching for Carol, who let out an ear piercing scream of pure terror. Logan swung at a dead run, connecting full force with the thing extending from the cloud. A hideous cracking sound as if fifty powder dry branches had snapped at once blotted out all sound for a split second before a howl of agony and rage echoed out from the cloud. The blackness rolled back suddenly as Logan halted to face it, between it and Carol. Appearing to grow upwards, snapping wisps of fragmented nightmare lunged out of the cloud as Logan swung the lead pipe in short concerted strokes. Storm, controlling her breathing with difficulty, ran up beside Logan, her arms raised over her head, palms outward.

EVOCATIO VALCYRIARUM, CONTUBERNALIA GLADIARIA,” Storm shouted out in commanding voice, repeating it over and over, as a torrent of wind driven debris hurtled into the darkness, driving it back.

With a final shriek of rage, the thing dissipated into the air, as Tracy reached her friends. The silence following the disappearance of the black cloud hung in the air so thickly it felt almost as if it were a tangible substance. Logan gripped the lead pipe with both hands, his chest heaving, looking down at Storm in disbelief. Storm stood still in place, her arms upraised to the night sky, a slight breeze blowing her white blonde hair back from her face. Eyes closed, and hands clenched in fists now instead of palms outward, Storm smiled a tight, thin lipped smile of satisfaction.
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